focused drawing for my front page

I drew two focused picture for my front page, each with minor differences and decided that i would see what looked best when i came to doing the front page itself.
Here are my drawings.

Here are my two drawings, with minor differences. The pictures are centered the same, the text and title are all placed the same

But in the first picture the main feature "charlotte clements" is in a circle. But while in the second picture it is in a banner.

The barcodes are slightly different places and a banner is placed at the bottom in  the second photo aswell at the top of the page.